Vol 5. Issue 3 The Weight Journal Vol 5. Issue 3 The Weight Journal

How to Build a House of Cards: the Comprehensive Guide to Living With OCD   — Alethea Lohse

Step 1: 

Create a sturdy foundation using only inherently unstable materials.  

Obviously,  

you know 

it’s irrational.  

Your hands must be spotless.   

You’ve now washed them  

long enough that the water’s run cold 

but you can’t  

stop. 

 

You scrub the soap in  

so frantically, the skin on your palms 

breaks.  Blood stains 

white suds peony pink.  

Burning, torn flesh  

washes down to clog the drain  

 

and you 

   are still  

 

   not  

 

 

clean. 

  

Step 2: 

Cautiously stack upwards, risking destruction with every addition.    

“Healing” looks like a small, warm office– 

glaring fluorescent lights,  

a sofa that seems to swallow you.  

  

Therapy is yet another routine,  

comforting in its familiarity.   

The easing scent of artificial citrus,  

a sharp, cooling taste of mint.    

The same questions,   

the same answers.  

  

“Are you aware these behaviors aren’t healthy?”  

“Is this your way of maintaining  

control?”  

 

“What are you  

so afraid  

of?”  

  

Step 3:  

Repeat the delicate balance, again and again and again and again.    

You live your days walking a tightrope.  

Step, by shaky step, staring   

into the abyss of madness gaping, 

endless and waiting  

 

at your feet.  

 

You do not know if  

those rituals and routines you cling to 

are the fraying     highwire,   your   last  

salvation— 

or the looming void  

that threatens to  

consume you.   

  

Step 4:  

Be ready for it all to come crashing down around you.    

A house of cards can never last long.   

No matter how careful,  

 

Shaking hands   

 

always   

 

eventually   

 

 

slip.   

  

Paper-thin   

 

pieces of  

yourself  

flutter  

down  

onto  

the  

floor.  

  

  

You pick them 

  back up  

and  

 

you try  

 

 

again.   


Alethea (Jamie) Lohse is a young queer artist in her senior year at Douglas Anderson School of the Arts Creative Writing Department. She explores all genres in her work but specializes in sequential art, Southern Gothic fiction, and free verse poetry. She currently serves as Community Engagement Director for Élan International Student Literary Magazine and hopes to study anthropology in college.

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Vol 5. Issue 3 The Weight Journal Vol 5. Issue 3 The Weight Journal

wireless — Nathaniel Im

anyway, i keep thinking about the old laptop we passed around after school,

blue light pooling over our faces like a second puberty—hot,

cords under your desk, knotted around our feet.

do you remember that? the fan’s buttery whir, the screen

exhaling its pixel glow while we typed to each other from

four inches apart, earbuds splitting one song between us.

god, they were so tangled—the rubber lined ones

hoarding earwax, secrets, they tugged and caught

impish phrases swapped on laggy desktop calls, our voices

jittering like cicadas against the plastic mic grill.

kids now won’t understand what that click was like, i swear

light shifted the moment the plugs aligned, a small spark sending

minute currents pressing inward and tracing

narrow seams of heat as they bloomed where the metal met metal. remember?

only then did the static settle into a low buzz in our brains.

pretty soon we had bluetooth, though, and in the room

quiet spread thickly across the walls

rising and falling like a lung set loose from its body.

soon everything would move that way. weightless, instant and

to touch nothing became the rule, whooshing cleanly over our bent knees,

untethered currents skimming overhead, quick as breath, wires splitting infinite.

video is so crisp now,

washes the screen into one mean plane.

xeric shadows thinning to husks under that overbright sheen,

you now watch them slide down, smooth as rain on glass,

zero softness left for anything that moves slower than its light.


Nathaniel Im, a junior at Portsmouth Abbey, engineers wearables that predict falls in the elderly—analyzing a stride's rhythm the way he scans Latin verse for meter and caesura. He's developing Kinetic Verse, a digital anthology pairing poems with movement visualizations, and preparing his first print collection. When he's not writing or coding, he's wrestling his dad in the snow or plotting Secret Santa twists—his veggie-hating brother once unwrapped ten cabbages, Pokémon cards buried underneath.

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Vol 5. Issue 3 The Weight Journal Vol 5. Issue 3 The Weight Journal

When my psychiatrist tries to explain my bipolar disorder to me — Kate Choi

The graph doesn’t get it. The sine function
waving like a white flag, the clean curves
of the concave, the current electric cold.
Two ice caps cut and crystallized. The lines
speak another language, curled with disdain:
psych-talk, Greek thrown around hasty as my hands
shuddering around a keyboard at 3AM.

Me, I’m a handful of pills and a shiver at midnight.
Me, I’m a slut for attention on my arms,
a victim of late-stage capitalism, a good Christian
who lost her way. An addict and an error
and never going to make it past twenty-seven.
I’m conforming, I’m shrinking, but I still want to be
everything they tell me I am, embraced
with wide arms and an open mouth.

There are the breathy instructions: breathe wide
open your eyes slowly
or is it breathe slow
open your eyes wide
—from the meditation app,
the medication trap, the new-world psychotherapist crap—
Everything defined by a prefix of too-much or not-enough:
hypomanic, hypersomnia, hypothymia.

The graph doesn’t get it. Blank and corporate,
it’s the mechanical curve of an undefined limit.
Top to bottom dissected into borderlines, roadkill
split open at the side of the road. Watch it rot.
The car passes by and you meet my eye,
glistening raw and red in the meaty sunlight.
They tell me: it goeth before the fall. I laugh
and I say try and stop me.


Kate Choi is a high school junior currently living in Seoul, South Korea. She writes fiction and poetry, and is currently attending Asia Pacific International School. Her publications include Paper Cranes Literary, The Amazine, and Young Writers Journal.

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